Elsa McKeenzie [FIN]

[Secret Agent Cat]

ELSA MCKEENZIE

A Long and Tedious Journey Awaits

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Username: elsa
Is This Character Canon?: No

Link to Audition Thread: Here's the link to her lite profile

Your Destiny is to Venture Upon It

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Name: Elsa Rose McKeenzie
Race: Human
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Homeworld: Destiny Islands

Your Decisions Will Decide the Outcome of the Universe

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Appearance: Elsa has medium/short(the length can vary for she cuts it a lot) brown hair and brown eyes. She stands about 5 feet 1 inch and is sixteen years old. She looks like any other teenager. She usually wears boy-ish clothes instead of girly clothes though since she does go to a school she can be seen wearing their girl uniform but when not at school she wears jeans, a shirt and a hoodie, along with Converse looking high-top shoes. She can wear skirts here and there but she prefers jeans. She usually has headphones around her neck and likes to wear hats. She usually wears light colored clothes, sometimes even pinks.

Personality:

•General Persona: Elsa is generally a kind hearted person who is very aloof and often times likes to crack a joke or two and just have fun. She is pretty laid back but very protective. She is strong, smart and sometimes very witty. She can be polite but when around friends she can be a bubble of fun. She respects others, especially her elders. Elsa is pretty optimistic, and even though she is pretty laid back and fun, she can be serious as well.

•Inner Thought Process: Elsa is a dreamer. She has dreams that she wants to accomplish but hardly shares her dreams with others. Elsa has always dreamed of being a teacher. She always tries her hardest at things, though to others it may seem that she is doing things easily when deep down she is struggling. She always strives to do her hardest, even at the simplest things.

•Fears: Losing hope, losing her dreams. Losing her friends and family.

•Pleasures: Hanging with her friends, reading. Writing. Having fun. Dreaming. Running. Drawing.

•Quirks: Has a thing for donuts. It is not uncommon for her to crack a joke.

But With Great Power Comes Great Responsibility

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Character Class: (Initiate, 1st Tier)
Stats:

•Strength: 6

•Cunning: 15

•Agility: 9

Abilities: [Abilities Post]

Weapons:

Weapons: None~ (Might obtain some later on.)
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But Your History Decides Your Version of "Responsibility"

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History:

Elsa McKeenzie is a inhabitant of the small group of islands known as Destiny Islands, she has lived there her entire life. Well, to her knowledge. She lives with her parents and had a younger brother but he went missing roughly three years ago. But let's start from the beginning, Elsa was born in the late summer and was the first child of John and Rebeccah McKeenzie. She lived a pretty normal life with her parents and was a pretty happy girl when growing up. She made friends quickly and easily. When she was six years old her baby brother Elden was born. At first she didn't let him play with her and her friends much, but he was pretty fun to hang out with. Plus, her parents made her watch and babysit him, for they went to places a lot.

Her parents were wealthy but not rich-rich, they owned a small house that was able to accommodate the whole family with a small extra room if there was company over, which there usually was. Elsa usually had friends over, which were often times boys, but not boyfriends. She wasn't quite into that stage yet, which her parents were grateful for. Elsa would often time invite friends over whenever she had to babysit her younger brother. But, tragedy hit the family hard three years ago when Elden, age seven, disappeared one night. He was claimed missing for five days and then presumed dead. There was evidence that he had been taken, a few miles away at the cliff of the island they lived on there was evidence he had been thrown off. But no body. The police presumed he had been dragged off into the ocean by the current.

This hit Elsa's parents hard, as well as Elsa herself. Somehow, deep down she blamed herself, though it wasn't. He had been taken during the night. Elsa thought he had run away, because the night before she and her brother had been arguing. He had wanted something and she wouldn't let him have it, plus she was too busy hanging out with her friends so she pretty much just ignored him. She was going through the beginnings of her teenager stage. She went through a bit of a depression but soon the memories of her brother began to fade and she began to go back to her original self, though there was something new. TThough she still loved hanging out with her friends and having fun, she had become serious as well. She did not want opportunities in her life to pass her by. She had dreams to become somebody. And deep down she somehow believed her brother was still out there somewhere.

Now in high school and having moved from the original island they had been on, to somehow forget about what had happened to Elsa's brother and the McKeenzie's son, they moved closer to Elsa's high school and friends. Elsa often times hangs out with her friends at their 'secret spot' as well as at the ice parlor at the corner near school. Elsie has a small group of friends but they are all pretty close and sometimes crazy.

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[Secret Agent Cat]

A B I L I T I E S

~Physical Abilities~

• ABILITY NAME Unarmed Combat Trainee
  ABILITY TYPE Advancement
  ABILITY DESCRIPTION Who says you need a weapon? Be your own weapon! Unarmed melee attacks are now twice as powerful as untrained and slightly more accurate.This ability cannot be stacked with other Weapon Advancement abilities.
  USAGE Passive; constant effect
  RANGE Self
  ELEMENT None
  POWER Weak
  SKILL REQUIRED 5 Strength (or) 5 Agility Discount: 10 Strength (or) 10 Agility
  COST 100 Munny
  
  
• ABILITY NAME Dodge Roll
  ABILITY TYPE Standard
  ABILITY DESCRIPTION Allows you to completely dodge one Weak Ability or normal melee attack, but not if your character is in the air or during a jump. Use common sense.
  USAGE Three uses per battle
  RANGE Self
  ELEMENT None
  POWER Weak
  SKILL REQUIRED 5 Agility Discount: 10 Agility
  COST 100 Munny
  
  
• ABILITY NAME Basic Counterattack
  ABILITY TYPE Standard
  ABILITY DESCRIPTION When your character is attacked at close range they automatically retaliate with equal force. Only triggered by normal attacks.
  USAGE Three times per battle. Requires one turn to activate. Can make a normal attack during activation turn.
  RANGE Self
  ELEMENT None
  POWER Weak
  SKILL REQUIRED 1 Strength Discount: 3 Strength
  COST 75 Munny 37.5 Munny
  
  
• ABILITY NAME Jump Boost
  ABILITY TYPE Standard
  ABILITY DESCRIPTION Characters with this Ability can jump 15 feet into the air at will.
  USAGE Passive, unlimited
  RANGE Self
  ELEMENT None
  POWER Weak
  SKILL REQUIRED 5 Agility Discount: 10 Agility
  COST 100 Munny
  
  

~Magical Abilities~
Tier;

• Fire
  
• Ice
  
• Lightning
  
• Wind
  
• Protect
  

Non-Tier;

• ABILITY NAME Lightning Bolt
  ABILITY TYPE Standard
  ABILITY DESCRIPTION The spellcaster points at a single target and a surge of electricity leaps across the distance.
  USAGE Three times per battle.
  RANGE 20 feet
  ELEMENT Electric
  POWER Weak
  SKILL REQUIRED 2 Cunning Discount: 5 Cunning
  COST 200 Munny 100 Munny
  
  
• ABILITY NAME Lightning Mage
  ABILITY TYPE Advancement
  ABILITY DESCRIPTION Basic training with spells and magics involving the electric element. Electric spells now jolt opponents, making their physical abilities half as effective, but boosting their spell magic. This ability's effects cannot be stacked with other Magic Advancement abilities.
  USAGE Passive; constant effect
  RANGE Self
  ELEMENT Lightning
  POWER Weak
  SKILL REQUIRED 5 Cunning Discount: 10 Cunning
  COST 100 Munny 50 Munny
  
  
• ABILITY NAME Light Burst
  ABILITY TYPE Standard
  ABILITY DESCRIPTION The spellcaster calls on the power of light to create a small destructive burst of radiant energy, damaging a single target.
  USAGE Four uses per battle. Target must be seen.
  RANGE Within 30 feet
  ELEMENT Light
  POWER Weak
  SKILL REQUIRED 10 Cunning Discount: 15 Cunning
  COST 200 Munny 100 Munny
  
  
• ABILITY NAME Light Beam

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ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Calling on the power of light, the spellcaster directs a shimmering ray of bright energy at a single target.
USAGE Four uses per battle.
RANGE Within 30 feet
ELEMENT Light
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 10 Cunning Discount: 15 Cunning
COST 200 Munny 100 Munny

[/li][li]ABILITY NAME Dark Burst
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION The spellcaster calls on the power of darkness to create a small destructive burst of dark energy, damaging a single target.
USAGE Four uses per battle. Target must be seen.
RANGE Within 30 feet
ELEMENT Darkness
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 10 Cunning Discount: 15 Cunning
COST 200 Munny 100 Munny

[/li][li]ABILITY NAME Dark Blast
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION A surge of dark energy gathers in the spellcaster's hand and is thrown like a fireball, doing damage to a single target.
USAGE Four uses per battle.
RANGE Within 30 feet
ELEMENT Darkness
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 10 Cunning Discount: 15 Cunning
COST 200 Munny 100 Munny
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~Weapon Abilities~

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~Unique Abilities~
Tier;

Magic Missile

ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION A simple but effective conjuration of non-elemental magic energies, the spell Magic Missiles is a favorite among beginning magicians. The spellcaster can conjure up three Magic Missiles per turn, radiant balls of energy the size of a cantaloupe that explode on contact with and solid surface. The magic missiles fly towards their target with a very slight homing ability -- they don't do sharp turns or weave through obstructions, but they will attempt to make a straight line towards their target.
USAGE Ten uses per battle (up to three Magic Missiles per use)
RANGE 50 feet
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak

~Custom Abilities

Staticspark Fist

ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Elsa charges electricity to one of her fist and it becomes engulfed in a ball of electricity. She can then slam her fist into her opponent with that said ball of electricity that her hand is engulfed in, or she can throw the ball at her opponent.
USAGE Three times per battle.
RANGE CQC to 20 feet.
ELEMENT Electricity/Lightning
POWER Weak

212.5/1000 Shop Credits.

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[White]

What needs Fixing

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Appearance & Personality

• *Elsa is pretty optimistic, and even though she is pretty laid back and fun, she can be serious as well.
  
• ”She has dreams that she wants to accomplish but rarely shares those thoughts, those dreams with others thinking that they will think that she is some kind of nerd or something. “(This isn’t a very clear sentence. I understand what you’re trying to say, but it’s still confusing.)

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Skill Rank & Abilities

• The ability Flash of Fists is not available to you because you do not have enough agility points.
  
• The ability Basic Parkour is not available to you because you do not have enough agility points.

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History

• *entire life. Well, to her knowledge.
  
• *born. At first she didn't let him play with her and her friends much, but he was pretty fun to hang out with. Plus, her parents made her watch and babysit him, for they went to places a lot.
  
• *which were often times boys, but not boyfriends.
  
• *There was evidence that he had been taken. A few miles away, at the cliff of the island they lived on, there was evidence he had been thrown off, but no body. The police presumed he had been dragged off into the ocean by the current. (I’m not too sure exactly what there is evidence of, please rewrite it so it’s clearer)
  
• *herself, though it wasn't.
  
• *Though she still loved hanging out with her friends and having fun, she had become serious as well. She did not want opportunities in her life to pass by.
  
• *Now in high school and having moved from the original island they had been on, to somehow forget about what had happened to Elsa's brother and the McKeenzie's son, they moved closer to Elsa's high school and friends.

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Shop Credits Spent:450
Shop Credits Left:550
Munny Spent:0

Other Comments
Custom ability is gonna have to wait for approval for a little bit.

[Secret Agent Cat]

For some reason I thought I had 15 Agility xD

Personality: Fixed, rearranged and added some.

Abilities: Deleted the two I thought I had Agility for. :P And added some more, so you may just want to look through the whole thing again :)

History:

There was evidence that he had been taken. A few miles away, at the cliff of the island they lived on, there was evidence he had been thrown off, but no body. The police presumed he had been dragged off into the ocean by the current.

Well, I kind of wanted it left open...I was going to have her brother somehow be alive but somehow he got transported to another world. If somehow the worlds do open up to Elsa, perhaps she could find her brother...

I was trying to come up with something that could make him dead, but somehow alive...

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What needs Fixing

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Skill Rank & Abilities

• Your custom ability is allowed only if it is limited to Elsa being able to throw it and use it to punch. There is no blasting.
  

History

• Your history is good now. Just so you’re clear, Elsa’s brother cannot be in another world. He is allowed to be missing somewhere in Destiny Islands and show up. He may show up in another world once worlds become unlocked. Until then, he remains on Destiny Islands.
  
• What do you mean by dead and somehow alive? You mean thought to be dead but still alive?
  

Shop Credits Spent:788
Shop Credits Left:212
Munny Spent:0

Other Comments
I’m sorry it took so long for this update! D:

[Rocket!]

3 day warning before denied! Hurry back, Elsa!

Also, cool font! -nod-

[Rocket!]

3 days have come and gone. Sorry Elsa...

Denied.

[Secret Agent Cat]

Abilities:

-I fixed her custom ability, as to where she cannot blast it.

History:

-Yes, what I think I meant was that he was thought to be dead, but was actually alive...

[prythian]

Done.

Locked and Moved. ^^