Post by mrcrazycakes on Jan 1, 2011 10:48:48 GMT -5
For Sora:
Field Name: Appearance
New Field Description: Sora is your average skinny fourteen year old kid with bright blue eyes in terms of appearance apart from his incredibly spiky brown hair. He’s a little shorter than most kids his age, but that doesn’t stop him from having a good time. Typically, Sora wears an outfit consisting of a red T-shirt beneath a black-and-grey vest, and baggy red shorts that close off at the knees, with big yellow shoes. Sora’s hands are adorned with one fingerless grey-ish white glove each, and he wears a necklace with a crown motif around his neck. A blue belt is held loosely around his waist, and his entire outfit has occasional splashes of yellows and blues. It looks like Sora's sprouted up a few inches in height recently, so his pants now only reach to right above his knees, though he doesn't seem to have noticed yet.
Explanation:He's too short Character development.
Two for Seifer:
Field Name: Appearance
New Field Description: Seifer is a thin, muscular young man with blonde hair stuffed into a black tuque with the “Ore” Kanji. His usual attire is a cropped blue vest with white lining, the lines curving upwards and making a cross shape on his chest. A sleeveless white jacket hangs off his shoulders, and his aubergin pants are somewhat large, accentuated with a wheat gold rope belt, the pants leg stuffed into a pair of black combat boots. He is fairly tanned, but not excessively so. He has a scar in a diagonal from above his left eye down to just below his right from an accident involving his dad and an umbrella. Thanks to an escapade into the sewers, Seifer now sports a few smaller scars on his face, and no longer has his hat.
Explanation: More character developmentlost it in the sewers
Field Name: Secondary weapon
New Field Description: Secondary Weapon Name: Wood Bat
Secondary Weapon Type: Blunt
Secondary Weapon Description: A wooden bat made in the likeness of a Struggle bat. Seifer generally uses it against the people who choose to cheat in the Struggle.
Explanation: Gave it the wrong name and description when I made Seifer; correcting it now.
And I'd also like to use my other title slot to put in the 'Radiant Garden Defender' title.
Field Name: Appearance
New Field Description: Sora is your average skinny fourteen year old kid with bright blue eyes in terms of appearance apart from his incredibly spiky brown hair. He’s a little shorter than most kids his age, but that doesn’t stop him from having a good time. Typically, Sora wears an outfit consisting of a red T-shirt beneath a black-and-grey vest, and baggy red shorts that close off at the knees, with big yellow shoes. Sora’s hands are adorned with one fingerless grey-ish white glove each, and he wears a necklace with a crown motif around his neck. A blue belt is held loosely around his waist, and his entire outfit has occasional splashes of yellows and blues. It looks like Sora's sprouted up a few inches in height recently, so his pants now only reach to right above his knees, though he doesn't seem to have noticed yet.
Explanation:
Two for Seifer:
Field Name: Appearance
New Field Description: Seifer is a thin, muscular young man with blonde hair stuffed into a black tuque with the “Ore” Kanji. His usual attire is a cropped blue vest with white lining, the lines curving upwards and making a cross shape on his chest. A sleeveless white jacket hangs off his shoulders, and his aubergin pants are somewhat large, accentuated with a wheat gold rope belt, the pants leg stuffed into a pair of black combat boots. He is fairly tanned, but not excessively so. He has a scar in a diagonal from above his left eye down to just below his right from an accident involving his dad and an umbrella. Thanks to an escapade into the sewers, Seifer now sports a few smaller scars on his face, and no longer has his hat.
Explanation: More character development
Field Name: Secondary weapon
New Field Description: Secondary Weapon Name: Wood Bat
Secondary Weapon Type: Blunt
Secondary Weapon Description: A wooden bat made in the likeness of a Struggle bat. Seifer generally uses it against the people who choose to cheat in the Struggle.
Explanation: Gave it the wrong name and description when I made Seifer; correcting it now.
And I'd also like to use my other title slot to put in the 'Radiant Garden Defender' title.
