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Post by Nystearica Darcia on Apr 26, 2010 19:10:58 GMT -5
A Long and Tedious Journey Awaits [/b][/size][/center][/u] Username: Aienma Is This Character Canon?: no
Link to Audition Thread:
Your Destiny is to Venture Upon It [/b][/size][/center][/u] Name: Mystearica Darcia Race: human Age: 19 Gender: female Homeworld: Radiant Garden
Your Decisions Will Decide the Outcome of the Universe [/b][/size][/center][/u]
Appearance: Hell correspondence not really just click me
Personality:
•General Persona: Nystearica comes off as a person who doesn't care about others. She is always so calculating, and acts like an evil girl who doesn't want anyone else's help and also believes that she can do it all her own. She also comes off to be so witty, and acts like no one is to be there for her. She is also shy, and rubs others in the wrong way. She is really a kind person who wants to be loved and be there for others. She is also is trustworthy. She just acts evil to hide the fact that she is really so sweet and caring. She just wants to make sure that she opens up, and be there for her friends and make new friends. She is really friendly.
•Inner Thought Process: Nystearica was a calm, and sweet woman, but she also had a bloodlust when she gets into trouble. She was kind-hearted. She is a gentle, beautiful and sad woman that has a sad look in her eyes. She had cared deeply about everyone that is on earth because the people were the world to her. She had wanted to spend all her years with them because she had given her heart to anyone she made friends with. She had only wanted to make sure that he was with her because she had felt that it was true love that they had.
She only wants people, like her friends, to accept her. So she is very trustworthy. She is also kind and sweet towards the people wants to be around, but very cold towards people who hurt others. She is very soft-spoken and very calculating in her ways of thinking of a plan up to make it work for her. She just adores her friends from the bottom of her heart. She is awfully shy around people when she first meets them because she doesn't know how to deal and because she doesn't know what to say to them unless they strike up a conversation with her. Then she opens up her heart and speaks to them. She doesn't talk much because she doesn't get along with people much, but she always speaks about her friends in the highest regards, but when it comes towards heartless, she speaks about him in the lowest regards. InuKamia is always trying to make friends with almost everyone because she wants to be friends with Inutaisho, because in her eyes, Inutaisho is everything towards her.
Nystearica is cheerful, active, strongly competitive, resourceful, who feels people’s pain and feels what they feel in their hearts. She reads several moves ahead at the same time. She can change from being a sweet girl to being a sensitive woman when she sees someone she loves is hurting.
•Fears: She is afraid of dying, and letting other people die in front of her.
•Pleasures: The only pleasure she gets is the sweets that she can eat.
•Quirks: Her quirk is tapping her fingers
But With Great Power Comes Great Responsibility
[/b][/size][/center][/u] Character Class: Stats:
•Strength: 10
•Cunning: 10
•Agility: 10
Abilities:
Weapons:
Weapons: Primary Weapon Name: Macintiya Primary Weapon Type: Blunt Primary Weapon Description: Nystearica has the staff to fight with she needs to use her staff to use her magic with all her spells are use by her staff.
Secondary Weapon Name: Macientia Secondary Weapon Type: Bladed Secondary Weapon Description: She sometimes has to take up a sword to fight, but otherwise she would just have to make sure she used her sword the best she can. Her sword is a crystal sword, which is an old family heirloom.
Items: • potion • ether • potion • potion
[/blockquote] But Your History Decides Your Version of "Responsibility" [/b][/size][/center][/u] History: Nystearica Darcia was born in Radiant Garden to the parents of Kaytia and Mackie Darcia. She has two younger sisters, Keynesian is fifteen years old, and Devina is sixteen years old. Nystearica got along well with her sisters because they knew about the beating their older sister received; beatings they might have received too were it not for Nystearica.
Her father abused her in the evenings when her mother was out, because he was concerned that Nystearica’s mother would leave him once she discovered the abuse. For this reason she was not beaten regularly either, only when opportunity presented itself. Afterward Nystearica would hide the evidence of the abuse with make-up and then later in life with spells as she became more skilled at them.
Just as Nystearica tries to hide the physical evidence of her beatings at the hands of her father with make-up and spells, she tries to hide the emotional scars as well. She puts extra effort into appearing friendly and laughs off any suggestion that her father is anything but the loving father she wishes she had. Having so much conflict precipitated upon her by her father, she wishes to avoid any sort of conflict with others. In addition, because she can not make sense of the punishments her father gives her and feels shame that she has disappointed her father so much, she wants to avoid the topic at all costs and will go to any lengths to avoid letting her friends find out and begin asking painful questions. Nystearica also doesn’t want to burden her friends with her problems, figuring they have their own secrets and pains that they hide from her.
She was then trained by a priest to be an elemental mage, and she had trained day in and day out, and she had finally mastered the elemental spells that she needed to mastered.
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Post by Nystearica Darcia on Apr 26, 2010 20:19:00 GMT -5
ABILITY NAME Frost Infusion ABILITY TYPE Standard ABILITY DESCRIPTION The spellcaster temporarily enchants a weapon with weak ice damage. USAGE Twice per battle. Lasts three turns. RANGE Self or ally within ten feet ELEMENT Ice POWER Weak SKILL REQUIRED 5 Cunning Discount: 10 Cunning COST 250 Munny
Ability Name: Drought Ability Type: standard Ability Description: The ability to give gas and liquid form a chemical change, turning it to a liquid that dulls the senses, putting the opponent first into a dazed state. Usage: Target must be seen or drink water. Three times per thread with a three post cool down. range: within 30 feet Element: Water Power: Weak Skill Required: 10 Cunning Cost: free
ABILITY NAME Lightning ABILITY TYPE Standard ABILITY DESCRIPTION A small burst of lightning magic appears at the spellcaster's command, giving a single target a mild electrical shock. USAGE Once every other turn. Target must be seen. RANGE Within 30 feet ELEMENT Electric POWER Weak SKILL REQUIRED 2 Cunning Discount: 5 Cunning COST 200 Munny
ABILITY NAME Entangle ABILITY TYPE Standard ABILITY DESCRIPTION Calling on the power of nature, the spellcaster causes a tangle of vines to erupt from the ground and wrap around a single target, drastically cutting their mobility. Effected target can only move at 1/2 speed for the next turn. USAGE Three uses per battle. Two turn cool-down. Target must be seen. Only useable on natural ground. RANGE Within 30 feet ELEMENT Earth POWER Weak SKILL REQUIRED 10 Cunning Discount: 15 Cunning COST 250 Munny
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Post by White on Apr 26, 2010 22:31:45 GMT -5
For your custom ability, you need to estimate the amount of stats Nystearica will need to be able to use it. She also won't be able to use it once every turn, that's much too strong for a weak ability, so please make it so she can use it less often.
You've only spent 625 shop credits, leaving 375 credits that you can still use to buy more abilities or items. If you don't spend the credits now, they'll disappear forever, so try to get as much out of them as you can. =)
I corrected some of the grammar and spelling for you~
Below is what I fixed, so please read through it and tell me if anything needs to be changed. ^^
•General Persona: Nystearica comes off as a person who doesn't care about others. She is always so calculating, and acts like an evil girl who doesn't want anyone else's help and also believes that she can do it all her own. She also comes off to be so witty, and acts like no one is to be there for her. She is also shy, and rubs others in the wrong way. She is really a kind person who wants to be loved and be there for others. She is also is trustworthy. She just acts evil to hide the fact that she is really so sweet and caring. She just wants to make sure that she opens up, and be there for her friends and make new friends. She is really friendly.
•Inner Thought Process: Nystearica was a calm, and sweet woman, but she also had a bloodlust when she gets into trouble. She was kind-hearted. She is a gentle, beautiful and sad woman that has a sad look in her eyes. She had cared deeply about everyone that is on earth because the people were the world to her. She had wanted to spend all her years with them because she had given her heart to anyone she made friends with. She had only wanted to make sure that he was with her because she had felt that it was true love that they had.
She only wants people, like her friends, to accept her. So she is very trustworthy. She is also kind and sweet towards the people wants to be around, but very cold towards people who hurt others. She is very soft-spoken and very calculating in her ways of thinking of a plan up to make it work for her. She just adores her friends from the bottom of her heart. She is awfully shy around people when she first meets them because she doesn't know how to deal and because she doesn't know what to say to them unless they strike up a conversation with her. Then she opens up her heart and speaks to them. She doesn't talk much because she doesn't get along with people much, but she always speaks about her friends in the highest regards, but when it comes towards heartless, she speaks about him in the lowest regards. InuKamia is always trying to make friends with almost everyone because she wants to be friends with Inutaisho, because in her eyes, Inutaisho is everything towards her.
Nystearica is cheerful, active, strongly competitive, resourceful, who feels people’s pain and feels what they feel in their hearts. She reads several moves ahead at the same time. She can change from being a sweet girl to being a sensitive woman when she sees someone she loves is hurting.
•Fears: She is afraid of dying, and letting other people die in front of her.
•Pleasures: The only pleasure she gets is the sweets that she can eat.
•Quirks: Her quirk is tapping her fingers
Secondary Weapon Name: Macientia Secondary Weapon Type: Bladed Secondary Weapon Description: She sometimes has to take up a sword to fight, but otherwise she would just have to make sure she used her sword the best she can. Her sword is a crystal sword, which is an old family heirloom.
History: Nystearica Darcia was born in Radiant Garden to the parents of Kaytia and Mackie Darcia. She has two younger sisters, Keynesian is fifteen years old, and Devina is sixteen years old. Nystearica got along well with her sisters because they knew about the beating their older sister received; beatings they might have received too were it not for Nystearica.
Her father abused her in the evenings when her mother was out, because he was concerned that Nystearica’s mother would leave him once she discovered the abuse. For this reason she was not beaten regularly either, only when opportunity presented itself. Afterward Nystearica would hide the evidence of the abuse with make-up and then later in life with water spells as she became more skilled at them.
Just as Nystearica tries to hide the physical evidence of her beatings at the hands of her father with make-up and water spells, she tries to hide the emotional scars as well. She puts extra effort into appearing friendly and laughs off any suggestion that her father is anything but the loving father she wishes she had. Having so much conflict precipitated upon her by her father, she wishes to avoid any sort of conflict with others. In addition, because she can not make sense of the punishments her father gives her and feels shame that she has disappointed her father so much, she wants to avoid the topic at all costs and will go to any lengths to avoid letting her friends find out and begin asking painful questions. Nystearica also doesn’t want to burden her friends with her problems, figuring they have their own secrets and pains that they hide from her.
She was then trained by a priest to be a water priestess, and she had trained day in and day out, and she had finally mastered the water spells that she needed to mastered.
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Post by Nystearica Darcia on Apr 27, 2010 1:31:22 GMT -5
its fine as you have it
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Post by White on Apr 27, 2010 9:38:23 GMT -5
Alright, are you sure you don't want to buy any more items or abilities for her?
And you still need too edit her custom ability. She can't use it every turn. Because it's a status effect, I suggest you make it so she can use it three times per battle with a three post cool down. You also still need to guess how many skill points she'd need to use the ability. You can remove the part about manipulating the liquid, because I don't think anyone will be drinking something in the middle of combat.
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Post by Nystearica Darcia on May 1, 2010 19:05:30 GMT -5
remodified
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Post by White on May 1, 2010 19:58:15 GMT -5
Accepted, locked, and moved~[/b]
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Post by White on Jul 21, 2010 18:12:00 GMT -5
Deleted due to Creator being inactive.
PM a staff member for retrieval should you want this character back.
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