Mireille - Magical Avenger

[Spring [Complex]]

A Long and Tedious Journey Awaits

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Username: agent
Is This Character Canon?: No (ZOMG)

Link to Audition Thread: N/A (Z00MG)

Your Destiny is to Venture Upon It

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Name: Mireille
Race: Human
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Homeworld: Beast's Castle

Your Decisions Will Decide the Outcome of the Universe

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Appearance: Mireille stands around 5'5 in height and is relatively lightweight. She has brown hair which is usually worn in pigtails with ribbons tieing each tail up. Her eyes are hazel and go nicely with her round cheeks. Despite her age, her height and appearance make her look much younger (three years younger to be precise) but beneath her childish appearance she's far more developed and not nearly as youthful as her attire and face portray. She wears a green dress with a white corset and white apron. If she is attempting to sneak around, she'll add a dark blue cloak with a long hood to help mask her face in shadows.

When she is "Enchanted", her costume depends entirely on which world she's in.

Personality:

•General Persona: Mireille is a reserved young woman with a cheerful disposition. She's been rather sheltered her whole life and while she treats those within her family's circle as members of her family, she's become rather naive about the world at large. This is due to a disconnect between the books and education she has, with her own life experiences. She's been taught to be caring and courteous, yet tact enough in discussions in order to fit in with educated gentlemen.

•Inner Thought Process: "I know that we're from different worlds but why can't I be with him", this is a core thought within Mireille's mind. She's the victim of social status and seperated from her childhood friend. Secretly she'd do anything to be with him, give up everything she has but she doesn't understand what this truly means. Ultimately though because she cares so much for those within her "Family" as well as the one she truly loves, she'll do anything for them.

•Fears: Her fear is losing those in her "family" at large. The thought leaves her uneasy at night and has been the source of nightmares time to time, to which she's been reasured that nothing will happen. So strong is this fear that she'd go to the ends of the earth to correct the wrong that's been done to her "family" or to get "justice" for them.

•Pleasures: Growing up with so many people "company" has become her biggest pleasure. She's never been alone and while she takes it for granted, it's something she does appreciate at some level.

•Quirks: She tends to act tougher than she really is, mostly to bring people's spirits up. She has the soul of an entertainer, it's hard to see people down.

But With Great Power Comes Great Responsibility

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Character Class: (Class Name, Tier) Unclassed for now
Stats:

•Strength: 10

•Cunning: 5

•Agility: 15

Weapons:

Weapons:
Primary Weapon Name: Shining White Knight
Primary Weapon Type: Bladed
Primary Weapon Description: An unusual "sabre" it has the styling of a Katana, with a more traditional french handle (with a hand guard as well). The blade is 24' in length.

Secondary Weapon Name: Elegant Musketeer
Secondary Weapon Type: Ranged
Secondary Weapon Description: Elegant Musketeer is a white and black rifle. It's long shaft is white and the handle/trigger is black. It allows for ten rounds of ammo.

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But Your History Decides Your Version of "Responsibility"

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History:

Within a small village there existed a manor owned by a rich minister. He had a beautiful daughter whom was coming of age, though she was no "Belle". She had everything she could ever want and was well talked about within the town none the less. Her father ensured that she live the life of the upper class and prevented her from being in contact with the "lower" class whenever he could, with one exception that he hadn't quite anticipated.

There was a tailor in town whom he had funded. Said tailor made the finest garments, supplying to the rich, middle, and poor alike. Due to the munny he made, his social status was somewhere between upper middle and lower rich class. He had a son whom was an aspiring musician. This son grew up within Mireille's "court" and was like "family" as a result. Her father never thought anything of their relationship, for he already had suitors prepared.

However, Mireille had fallen in love with the musician. His name was Francis and he was eighteen. While certainly no "Gaston", his determination left much to be admired. Unfortunately Francis just had no aptitude for music at all, it was simply a passion for him as he'd travel out of town to the city many times in his life. One night he was visited by a cloaked stranger after he attempted to peform in the town. Everyone laughed at his poor playing and left him stranded in the town square. However her voice had caught his ear, he was enchanted by her words. She requested that he play for her and he complied. Of course he played terribly, but she clapped all the same.

She then explained to him that she could help him become the best musician in all of France. However he was forbidden to do one thing, he could not use his talents for financial gain. At the time, this did not seem like a bad deal. His family while not rich like Mireille were well off enough and if need be, he could simply take over the family business. Thus for awhile he continued to play within the townsquare and at the bar. Those whom laughed at him were now admirers of his work. Hearing about his hard work turning into talent, Mireille's mother gives Francis a chance to play for them at a dinner in the manor.

He performs splendidly and this is when Mireille's father catches wind of her "love" for Francis. Angered by this, he sets out in secret to bring down Francis' father's business. Withdrawing any investment in the store secretly and getting customers of the high class to go elsewhere, soon even clients in the middle class would stop frequenting his shop, causing him to go out of business. To make matters worse, Francis' mother becomes sick and so he is faced with a dilema. Should he use his talents for financial gain?

His first fan, that woman whom he owed his talent to had forbade him from doing so but ultimately he caves into pressure from his family as well as the "support" from his fanbase in town. At first this performance goes off without a hitch and there was no sign of the cloaked woman anywhere. Thus the money and now fame get to his head. He had lost his "passion" for music and was consumed by fame and greed for money. There would be a concert held out of town and Mireille whom had been barred from seeing Francis directly is assisted by her attendants to go see the performance when her father is away on official business.

However there would be no performance, when Francis was due on stage, a chance for Mireille to be reunited with her love, he had vanished. The cloaked lady had come to see him behind the scenes and for breaking his vow, he was transformed into a song bird and trapped within a cage. The cage was hand delivered to the Castle grounds deep within the forest. These lands belonged to a certain "Prince" and so the bird was now apart of his property and thus a "servant" of the Beast.

Mireille cried all the way home that night. After she had worked so hard to make this night work out. She had planned to profess her love to Francis and offer to run away together. She was told to forget about him and that her father did not wish for her to be with him anyway. Ah but before she could lose hope, she was visited by a flower delivery girl. This girl delivered to her a single rose with a pink gem infused locket. It was quite a beautiful gift to cheer Mireille up but by itself it would do no such thing. So the delivery girl explains to her that this locket was magical. It could give her the power to find Francis and bring to justice those whom had taken him away from her.

There was no need to be skeptical in her eyes at that moment. The only downfall to this locket was that it was fueled by magic. Should the magic run out, she would not have the power to find Francis. She would not let that happen, that's how much she loved him. Accepting the condition at face value, the delivery girl enchants Mireille, giving her the power that she needed all the while stressing how important it was to have this power.

Oh but if only she knew...the very being whom took Francis away from her, had just cursed her to a life of darkness, all for "True Love", what a cruel enchantress.

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[Spring [Complex]]

[hp=28/28]
(Enchanted Mode HP)
[hp=8/8]
(Regular Health when untransformed)

Tier 1: Untaken

Starter Physical
ABILITY NAME Aim
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Rule #96! Take a turn to make sure your next shot lands home. After using Aim, a regular attack on your next turn will be twice as accurate. Works with melee, ranged, and thrown weapons. Cannot be used with another Ability.
USAGE Unlimited. Requires one turn to activate.
RANGE Self
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 1 Agility Discount: 3 Agility
COST 75 Munny (Discounted: 37.5)


ABILITY NAME Basic Counterattack
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION When your character is attacked at close range they automatically retaliate with equal force. Only triggered by normal attacks.
USAGE Three times per battle. Character must be prepared in advance for the attack.
RANGE Self
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 1 Strength Discount: 3 Strength
COST 75 Munny (Discounted: 37.5)


ABILITY NAME Basic Battlecry
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Give a mighty shout, striking fear into your enemies and bolstering your friend's courage! One ally in range can use their normal attack at the strength of a Weak Ability on their next turn.
USAGE Three times per battle
RANGE One ally within 30 feet
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 3 Strength Discount: 5 Strength
COST 100 Munny (Discounted: 50)


ABILITY NAME Jump Boost
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Characters with this Ability can jump 15 feet into the air at will.
USAGE Passive, unlimited
RANGE Self
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 5 Agility Discount: 10 Agility
COST 100 Munny (Discounted: 50)

ABILITY NAME Bladed Weapon Trainee
ABILITY TYPE Advancement
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Basic training with swords, daggers, and other sharp pointy metal tools. Melee attacks with a bladed weapon are now twice as accurate as untrained and deal 1.5x normal damage. This ability cannot be stacked with other Weapon Advancement abilities.
USAGE Passive; constant effect
RANGE Self
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 5 Agility Discount: 10 Agility
COST 100 Munny (Discounted: 50)



ABILITY NAME Blunt Weapon Trainee
ABILITY TYPE Advancement
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Basic training with staffs, gauntlets, hammers, and other smash-and-bash weapons. Melee attacks with a blunt weapon are now twice as powerful as normal and slightly more accurate. This ability cannot be stacked with other Weapon Advancement abilities.
USAGE Passive; constant effect
RANGE Self
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 5 Strength Discount: 10 Strength
COST 100 Munny (Discounted: 50)



ABILITY NAME Ranged Weapon Trainee
ABILITY TYPE Advancement
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Basic training with throwing knives, bow and arrows, pistols, and similar 'reach out and touch someone' weapons. Ranged attacks are now twice as accurate as untrained and deal 1.5x normal damage. This ability cannot be stacked with other Weapon Advancement abilities.
USAGE Passive; constant effect
RANGE Self
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 5 Agility Discount: 10 Agility
COST 100 Munny (Discounted: 50)

ABILITY NAME Unarmed Combat Trainee
ABILITY TYPE Advancement
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Who says you need a weapon? Be your own weapon! Unarmed melee attacks are now twice as powerful as normal and slightly more accurate. This ability cannot be stacked with other Weapon Advancement abilities.
USAGE Passive; constant effect
RANGE Self
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 5 Strength (or) 5 Agility Discount: 10 Strength (or) 10 Agility
COST 100 Munny (Discounted: 50)

ABILITY NAME Precision Stab
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION This ability allows a bladed weapon to strike a single point with perfect accuracy. Only an ability will allow the target to avoid the blow.
USAGE Three times per battle
RANGE Close combat
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 10 Agility Discount: 15 Agility
ABILITY REQUIRED Bladed Weapon Trainee
COST 200 Munny (Discounted: 100

ABILITY NAME Rush
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION When used at the end of their turn this ability allows a character to rush at another character and begin their next turn in close combat range of within 5 feet. During the time that the user is flying toward their goal they can not dodge or block any ranged-combat attacks that are used on them by the target before they reach them, but they will avoid normal or Weak Ability attacks from other enemies automatically due to their speed.
USAGE Three times per battle
RANGE 10 feet minimum, 30 feet maximum
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 10 Agility Discount: 15 Agility
ABILITY REQUIRED Basic Parkour
COST 150 Munny (Discounted: 75)

ABILITY NAME Basic Parkour
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Parkour is the art of moving quickly and fluidly through an obstacled area, such as a city, town, forest, or cave setting, with superior climbing, jumping, balance, and acrobatic maneuvers. Basic parkour skills allow for characters to flee, dodge, and elude pursuit as well as overcome difficult terrain better than the average person.
USAGE Passive; constant effect
RANGE Self
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 15 Agility Discount: 20 Agility
COST 250 Munny


Starter Magic
N/A

Physical Abilities

Magic Abilities

Weapon Abilities

Custom Abilities
Free weak ability upon creation
ABILITY NAME Enchanted Girl
ABILITY TYPE Specialty
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Enchanted by a wicked Fairy, Mireille has gained a great power for a great sacrifice. This ability allows Mireille to "transform" and thus becomes enchanted. As an Enchanted Girl she is able to utilize physical and magical abilities that were otherwise out of the question for her (as in being able to learn/use physical and magical abilities period). However she can only utilize these abilities when she is enchanted. The magical locket that she was given loses its shine the more magic she utilizes and is only able to support 15 Charges before it needs to be refueled with more magic. These charges can be refueled by directly being hit by Magic (which recharges the gauge by the following values: Weak - 1, Average - 2, Strong - 3, Legendary - 4) or by taking magic from a magical item (in the case of an item, such as an enchanted rose, it will temporarily lose it's magic before it recharges itself but this can only be done outside of combat. When this occurs the charges return in full) or if she touches someone with magical abilities (at which point she will gain a charge back and an ability will lose usage or go into cool down, for every touch attack she performs). Transformation into Enchanted mode takes one turn, at which point Mireille cannot attack or take any other action that post. On the bright side, she can't be harmed for that duration either. Should Mireille wish to untransform, it will take one charge to do so. She also cannot untransform and then transform in the same post.
USAGE Allows Mireille the ability to fight but fades over time as she uses magic spells or abilities that directly use her magic. It allows for 15 usages before needing to be recharged.
RANGE Self
ELEMENT Darkness
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 5 Cunning 5 Strength 5 Agility Discount: 10 Cunning 10 Agility 10 Strength
COST 150 Munny

ABILITY NAME Enchanted Weapons
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION When Mireille is Enchanted, she can use this spell to create multiple copies of her weapons. These weapons are exactly the same as their original and consume charges from the Locket. The more weapons created, the greater the cool down is before she can create more weapons. Weapons created with this spell can be dismissed at will but will automatically disappear after a duration of time.
USAGE By sacrificing a charge from her Locket, Mireille can create duplicate weapons of the ones she possesses. For each weapon made, a cool down of one turn is added before she can make more and it consumes a charge. Weapons created last for a period of 3 turns before vanishing into darkness.
RANGE Self
ELEMENT Darkness
POWER Weak
SKILL REQUIRED 5 Cunning Discount: 10 Cunning
COST 200 Munny

Extra Custom Slot: 150 Munny

ABILITY NAME Enchanted Step
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION When Mireille is Enchanted, her body is enhanced by her magic. This ability affects her speed, allowing her to move rapidly in a direction as if blinking from one step to the next, to a maximum of 10 feet. This ability can't be used to dodge abilities. It can however dodge normal attacks.
USAGE 3 Times per battle. Each usage consumes two charges from Enchanted Girl.
RANGE Self, distance up to a maximum of 10 feet.
ELEMENT None
POWER Weak
Ability Required Rush
SKILL REQUIRED 10 Agility Discount: 15 Agility
COST 150 Munny

[Rocket!]

Gun needs ammo...

Good lord, that history is pretty darn impressive...

Might want to reconsider buying Blunt Weapon Trainee given you have no such weapon...

Enchanted Girl doesn't need to be an ability. I mean, that's something you could RP out-- limiting yourself and so on, noting changes from recieved magical abilities. Only two things really make Enchanted Girl an ability:

1. Causing another character to enter a cooldown/lose a use.
2. FREAKING INVINCIBILITY WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVEN

If you're still opting for making it an ability, the forcing others into a cooldown/use bit should let the subjected character-- PC and NPC alike-- choose which ability knocks it down.

Also, invincibility is a no-no. I mean, it's a Weak Ability. Fix that! xD

Just to keep beating the dead horse, though, just what is a charge? Is it pretty much a use counter for Enchanted Mode? Does it determine the duration of Enchanted Mode?

Enchanted Weapons is probably going to get thrown out unless you're adamant, though. I'm A-OK with the ability, save the Skill Requirements. For that kind of ability, I'm leaning towards 10-15 Cunning minimum, given the sheer power of quadruple-shotgun-weilding. I can't say it's out for sure, of course-- I don't know what a charge is yet! xD

But yessssssssssssssssssssss.

Looking forward to thisssssssssssssssssss.

:3

[Spring [Complex]]

Well the second option I feel is a small benefit to the huge and severe limitations the ability places on the user. Charges are usage counters in Enchanted Mode. Since it's a weak ability and it's only other usefulness was to steal usage of magic from other people (combat) and items (Plot), I spinned it with an interesting IC twist. This character can only access the necessary combat skills when Enchanted Mode is on and while there is invincibility, that was more of a way to just not further hinder her anymore that she already is. It's basically like, Battle starts, Mireille has to transform or she's not fighting. So she's essentially going a round without being able to take any action which if you can imagine from a quest standpoint and such is pretty bad because it gives opponents time to setup (like casting Protect/Barrier, heal, the moon is at their fingertips for that turn).

Now that I've explained the pros/cons there, Enchanted Weapons having less Cunning requirements makes more sense because it requires Enchanted Girl to be in affect AND it uses the established usage counter with cool downs too (forgot to mention, it only works in Enchanted Mode also). Though I am uncertain how much ammo the shotgun should have, suggest something fair and I'll roll with it. Also the sheer power of quadruple shotgun wielding doesn't exist =\ Pryth caught this one but basically the ability doesn't allow her to control the weapons telekinetically or anything like that. So you could make plenty sure, but she's only got two arms, so she can really only shoot two at a time anyway =\ I'd be a little more concerned with the ability to make more swords haha but that's a melee weapon so even it doesn't get any nice benefits.

I hope that explains it well oh and hmm letting the PC/NPC pick given it's a weak ability sounds fair. I'm assuming then that in the future if it's upgraded to Average/Strong/etc that I'd be able to pick =]? Just so the upgrade path is clear xD

As for Blunt Weapon Trainee, eh it's 50 Munny y'know? I wouldn't even know where to spend that elsewhere and it's nice to be able to grab something blunt and be competent (as an aside, I liked the idea of being made competent physically, like a true heroine so I went after all the forms of combat intentionally).

[Rocket!]

CONCERNS HAVE BEEN RAISED IN THE CBOX

PLEASE POST UPON EDITING COMPLETIONINGS!

[Rocket!]

Oh goodness I have another raised bit, and I am so so sorry that I found it. XD;

I'm having a hard time seeing Enchanted Girl-- as a Specialty-- at 5 Cunning.

Could you justify that for me? ^^;;

[Spring [Complex]]

Well I went with Specialty simply cause I noticed Bilby did it with a custom to describe something a little "unusual" beyond the means of...hmm a "standard" ability let's say. I could just as easily say "Standard" if need be but I figured this ability is certainly of "specialty". Now as for 5 Cunning, let me be honest and say that I intend to grow this ability (plus I like having 15 Agility and not 10), so as Mireille grows, the cunning requirements (as well as he handicap) will rise. Considering it is more harmful than useful, I felt five was okay to check in with for this ability. Also, since I've got you here, going to be adding a custom slot and one more ability (cause I just need to get her just right to do her inspiration justice), last one for sure. Is there anything in the non-abilities section I should tweak while we debate or will we be able to clear her tonight and do some much needed RP =]?

[Rocket!]

Augh, I'm sorry, but... I'm gonna call for a minimum of 10 Cunning for Enchanted Girl, on account of complexity and power.

And Enchanted Step checks out! -nod-

And me too, on the RP front. X3

But yeah, 10 Cunning's a minimum from me. Pryth's free to overrule me, but... I can't see this ability not having the same Cunning requirement as Fire, as a minimum. xD;

[Spring [Complex]]

Alright, edits made according to Cbox requests, Munny should check-out finally. So I believe we're good to GOOOOO~!

[Rocket!]

Looks good to me, yup yup!

Finally, right? xD

Character Approved! 125 munny deducted!

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