Vir- The Star Hero

[00Penguin]

A Long and Tedious Journey Awaits

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Username: kashew
Is This Character Canon?: No

Link to Audition Thread:N/A

Your Destiny is to Venture Upon It

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Name: Vir
Race: Human
Age: 18
Gender: Male

Your Decisions Will Decide the Outcome of the Universe

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Appearance: Vir stands at 6 feet, with light brown scruffled hair. Sort of hidden underneath his hair he wears a red headband with a gold star in the middle. He wears a sleeveless tan tight shirt which shows his slight built body. He also wears cargo shorts that cover his knee caps when he's standing. He wears the sheath of his sword on his back with the hilt pointed right.

Personality:

General Persona: Vir acts much like his name translated means which is that of a hero. He has a heroic sense of justice, unfortunately because of this additude he's a bit loud about it. He jumps in at everything to show to people that he is what he is.

Inner Thought Process: Unfortunately his inner thought process is the same as he acts on the outside, with narration. What he thinks is about his goal in life, which is as he would quote "To pierce the sky and become one of the stars."

Fears: It's not really fear but more of a hate, and as he says if he ever see it his weakness. The evil dastardly... preztel?

Pleasures: His one true pleasure in life is really that of an over-the-top hero, doing good deeds, laughing in the face of danger, and standing up for the weak... Okay maybe that's more than one thing, and maybe two of them are the same. Sue me.

Quirks: He stubborn, even if he's beaten or someone is trying to change his thoughts of hero or do something bad he justs stubborn.

But With Great Power Comes Great Responsibility

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Character Class: Fighter E1st Tier
Stats:

Strength:23

Cunning:6

Agility:12

Abilities:

Weapons:

Weapons:
Primary Weapon Name: Stella
Primary Weapon Type: Melee Weapon EBladed Weapon
Primary Weapon Description: A 3 foot gladius with a hilt guard in a U-shape when the sword held vertical with the point up. Engraved into the blade itself is an image of a shooting star, the tail of it going to where the hilt meets the blade.

Secondary Weapon Name: Fists
Secondary Weapon Type: Melee Weapon EUnarmed Weapon
Secondary Weapon Description: Really do you have to ask for one?

Items:
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But Your History Decides Your Version of "Responsibility"

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History:
He lived most of his life on the streets, with little food and no graditude. The only thing that would keep him going is the idea of a hero. Amoung the others on the street, he tried keeping them in order but most of the time would end up being beaten and left for dead. There was only one person who believed that he could make the difference. Because of this Vir left to find a way to become the hero for his friend, which brought him to the Olympus Coliseum. He heard of someone who could train heros. (No it wasn't Phil, he missed that rumor some how.) He came to the door of the man who he thought would make him a hero and SLAM! Door to the face, the man flat said no to him, said he was retired and he wanted nothing to do with anyone on that topic. Of course, Vir never gave up, day after day he came back to the man asking to train to be a hero. And every day the man said no. Well the process was the same everytime, until he made a deal with Vir. If Vir beat him in a match, he would train him; however if he didn't he was to forget about the idea of being a hero and leave him alone. Well the match comenced and the clear cut winner was the Master, but Vir was never going to give up saying that he would die trying to become the hero that people would look up to. Well it got to the Master in the sense that it reminded him of himself when he wanted to be hero. So not trying to look he was giving up the match, he gave the match to Vir and took him under his wing. He trained to the very bone, breaking those bones and rebuilding them. Everything was good until one day they were taking a break and Vir was eating preztels when he started choking on one he was eating. Well after a while of choking and almost going to the light he coughed it up. Vir made the conclusion that the preztels would most likely kill him the next time so he vowed to never let another preztel come to his mouth again. Though his Master did say it was his fault for not eating it well. Now the sword and headband, those were gifts that were given to him by his Master. The reason behind the star designs, from what his Master said were because of the goal that Vir himself set. "To Reach the Sky and Become one of the Stars." Which is a bit of a goal to set for being a hero on the world of Olympus Coliseum.

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[00Penguin]

Ability Name: Donft Ignore Me!
Ability Description: If an enemy you attacked in your last turn doesnft attack you during their turn, you may make one normal attack on them that cannot be dodged or blocked without the use of an evasive or defensive Ability (unless the target is using a shield as a weapon, in which case they can block at will). Target must be in close combat range (no more than ten feet away).
Usage: Three uses per battle
Range: Ten feet
Element: None
Power: Weak

Ability Name: Basic Counterattack
Ability Type: Standard
Ability Description: When your Character is attacked at close range they automatically retaliate with equal force. Only triggered by normal attacks.
Usage: Three times in battle. Requires one turn to activate. Can make a normal attack during activation turn.
Range: Self
Element: None
Power: Weak
Skill Required: 1 Strength
Cost: 75 Munny

Ability Name: Jump Boost
Ability Type: Standard
Ability Description: Character with this Ability can jump 15 feet into the air at will.
Usage: Passive, unlimited
Range: Self
Element: None
Power: Weak
Skill Required: 5 Agility
Cost: 100 Munny

Ability Name: Bladed Weapon Trainee
Ability Type: Advancement
Ability Description: Basic training with swords, daggers and other sharp pointy metal tools. Melee attacks with a bladed weapon are now twice as accurate as untrained and slightly more powerful.
Usage: Passive, constant effect
Range: Self
Element: None
Power: Weak
Skill Required: 5 Agility
Cost: 100 Munny

Ability Name: Unarmed Combat Trainee
Ability Type: Advancement
Ability Description: Who says you need a weapon? Be your own weapon! Unarmed melee attacks are now twice as powerful as untrained and slightly more accurate.
Usage: Passive, constant effect
Range: Self
Element: None
Power: Weak
Skill Required: 5 Strength (or) 5 Agility Discount: 10 Strength (or) 10 Agility
Cost: 100 Munny

Ability Name: Dodge Roll
Ability Type: Standard
Ability Description: Allows you to completely dodge one Weak Ability or a normal attack, but not it your character is in the air or during a jump. Use common sense.
Usage: Three uses per battle
Range: Self
Element: None
Power: Weak
Skill Required: 5 Agility
Cost: 100 Munny

Ability Name: Mantra
Ability Type: Standard
Ability Description: A battle meditation that restores damage from normal attacks and Weak abilities. Cannot attack or use other Abilities in the same turn.
Usage: Three uses per battle
Range: Self
Element: None
Power: Weak
Skill Required: 10 Strength Discount: 15 Strength
Cost: 250 Munny

Ability Name: Fire Aura
Ability Type: Weapon
Weapon Type: All Weapons
Ability Description: The weapon is energized with magic, doing fire damage with every attack. For ranged weapons this ability causes the shots to burst into flames on contact with any solid object.
Usage: Unlimited
Range: Weapon Range
Element: Fire
Power: Weak
Cost: 300 Munny

ABILITY NAME Advanced Counterattack
ABILITY TYPE Standard
ABILITY DESCRIPTION When your character is attacked at close range they automatically retaliate with equal force while receiving only half damage. Only triggered by normal attacks and Weak physical attack Abilities.
USAGE Three times per battle. Character must be prepared in advance.
RANGE Self
ELEMENT None
POWER Average
SKILL REQUIRED 10 Strength Discount: 15 Strength
COST 200 Munny

ABILITY NAME Unarmed Combat Student
ABILITY TYPE Advancement
ABILITY DESCRIPTION Who says you need a weapon? Be your own weapon! Unarmed melee attacks are now three times as powerful as normal and twice as accurate. Replaces Unarmed Combat Trainee. This ability cannot be stacked with other Weapon Advancement abilities.
USAGE Passive; constant effect
RANGE Self
ELEMENT None
POWER Average
SKILL REQUIRED 10 Strength Discount: 15 Strength
COST 200 Munny


Custom
Ability Name: Burning Star
Ability Type: Standard
Ability Description: Vir implants Stella into the ground and props his right foot against Stella, his left leg bent to his chest and his arms out in front of him holding him back. He holds the position letting the air and his aura twist and heat up giving him the appearance of being on fire. Once at his peak he launches himself into a fast run (10 meter/sec) burning anything that comes close to him or is in front of him. Because it a run forward, he can't turn on the dime, or a colum for that matter. So really he just runs forward until reaches his distance or hits something.
Usage: Four uses per battle, 1 post charge
Range: 5 yards - Forward, 1 foot radius around self
Element: Fire
Power: Weak

Ability Name: Hard-Headed Hero
Ability Type: Standard
Ability Description: It could be because he stubborn, he could be born with it, or he built it up but whatever the case Vir has a hard head. He can take a blow to the head that could knock a person out. His head on impact with anything will leave a dent or crack, depending on the material. Of course, he can't destroy a person or their weapon, so denting or cracking not going to happen.
Usage: Passive
Range: Self
Element: None
Power: Average
Cost: 450

Custom Ability Slot 150 Munny

So the total should be:

1000 SC
and with the five Potions the total is:

1500 SC

Oh yeah, on the money...LOL
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[Rocket!]

Actually, since you get Bladed Weapon Trainee, Unarmed Weapon Trainee, Dodge Roll, and Mantra free with the Fighter Skill Rank, you've still got...

562.5 Shop Credits left!

On top of that, you get one free Weak ability (not slot) with creation... not Average. So, with the bonus from posting in the Hullo! thread, that gives you two Ability Slots, and one Weak Ability to create.

So, you might wanna take a second to re-evaluate your custom abilities.

Now, your History![/i]

Oh wait, that's not Phil.

...

Well, okay then! ^^


Hard-Headed Hero -- just add a quick line about how it can't dent or crack people or their weapons, and I'd be cool with this one at... say... a price tag of 450 munny.

Burning Star -- well, what would you call a "runner's position"? ^^;; And just how fast is Vir going at when he's sprinting? (Just to clarify and allow for possible dodging. ^^)

I'll be waitin'! ^^

[00Penguin]

Mostly Modify?

Well I took care of the things you wanted changed... I think.

So the total should be...

1425 SC?

[Rocket!]

All looks A-OK to me! Next time though, make sure you run it through a Spell Check, please? ^^

A-OK'D! Locked and moved![/i]

Ah, right.

Synthesis Material given!

[prythian]

Unaccepted.

Nutmore, you know why. Fix it.

[00Penguin]

To fix the problem, I added a sentence to the end of the history admitting what his homeworld is. A cheap way to fix it but what else am I suppose to do for that.

Now if you'll excuse me, I have a character to destroy and rebuild... again.

[Rocket!]

Destroy and r--

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa?

Do you, uh... need this to stay open?

[00Penguin]

Oh no, I'm just talking about another character that was but then wasn't approved due to some screw ups on both my part and information.

So you can go ahead and approve this one if you want.

[Rocket!]

Ah, okay! ^^

Awesome username, by the way!

Re-Approved! Moved![/i]